Redesign!!! DU DU DUUUUH!?!

ok so I've been just messing around and practicing my art skills, And I was watching Naruto

and of course, Takeo came to mind and I started drawing her in a whole new design. I actually like this design better, and look I even added a little Takeo. And I also fixed up her back story too \(030)/ so ya, don't be a lazy ass and just read it.

Basics:

Name: Takeo Yoshizaki

Nicknames (if any): Takeo-chan 

Nationality: Japanese

Birthplace: Hidden in the Stone Village

Grew up in: She traveled pretty much around all different kinds of villages with her sensei/ adoptive father, but after he was killed she ended up staying at the Hidden Leaf Village at 12

Age: 12

Gender: Female

Height: 5'1”

Weight: 98 lbs.

Blood Type: A-

Birthday: November 13

Eye Color: She's kinda blind so idk XDD

Hair Color: hazel nut brown

Scars/Piercings/Tattoos: Her feet are dirty and scratched up since she never wore shoes. and she likes to wear a bandage on her cheek.

Status: Genin

Phrase: "I may be Blind, but I'm not stupid."/ "Put a sock in it." /"Hello? Blind remember?"/ "Geez, what a pain."

Physical Description: It's in the picture dumb dumb -_-

Personality:

Good Traits: Determined, Brave, Challenging, Clever, Flexible, Freethinking, Hardworking, Observant, Intelligence 

Bad Traits: Cocky, Insulting, Stubborn, Boyish (At first meet, everyone thinks she's a boy XDD), Sarcastic, Tough (Meaning she doesn't know the words 'give up')

Fears: Being blind may hold her back

Favorite Food: Curry and dumplings

Hobbies: Training, Meditating, and Cooking

Yoshizaki Clan: The Yoshizaki Clan were branched off from the Nara Clan a century ago, but stayed close. Even after Kenji Yoshizaki (Takeo's great-great grandfather) had supposedly made a deal with Han-Riu. (a Dragon King bond to the Earth, at least that's what I read) Legend has it, Han-Riu had become bind to the Earth unable to reach the heavens, after centuries and centuries of being bonded to the Earth, Han-Riu's spirit was decaying. The mighty King Dragon needed a host to continue living on the Earth. But Only a certain blood line could become his host. Upon accidentally finding Kenji Yoshizaki, Han-Riu found the host he needed. Han-Riu made a deal with Kenji Yoshizaki, If Kenji allowed Han-Riu to share Kenji's spirit and Chakra and the offspring of the Yoshizaki family, he would allow Kenji to bring forth Han-Riu's chakra and spirit if needed along with blessing his future offspring and their offspring and so on with incredible power. After Takeo turned 5, The Yoshizaki family had been murdered and Takeo somehow survived; costing her her memories.

Bio: Takeo was born blind,  but she did not only lose her sight at birth, but her mother as well. Now only her father, her grandfather and herself were left. Although Takeo was born in the Stone Village, her family often visited the other branch of their family, The Nara Clan. The young Takeo and her distant cousin Shikamaru were close and he'd always watch over her. The Yoshizaki family lived happily. Until one night when Takeo was 5. Her family had been ambushed at home. Takeo was held by the enemy; listening to the screams of her father and grandfather as they were being murdered in front of her. But the enemy had another thing coming. After a few days of torturing the little blind Takeo, at the ridge of death Takeo had unleashed Han-Riu; killing the ninja's that had attacked her family. But after Han-Riu returned to Takeo's body, she had lost her memories. She soon began to wonder aimlessly until she bumped into a rouge ninja. He was, in a way, a Robin Hood. His name, Kuroda Naoki. Kuroda was once known as the greatest ninja alive, but he decided to travel around and help people. When the little Takeo had ran into him, Kuroda took her in and started teaching her justu and practically adopting her as his own. As she got older, Kuroda found she had Han-Riu's spirit in her and helped her to control his spirit and chakra. He also gave her a leaf village Genin headband to promote her himself as a ninja. The first blind ninja. But when Takeo was 12, her and Kuroda had gotten into a battle with other rouge ninja's, and they weren't so good. Kuroda Naoki was killed, just before the leader could die himself, leaving Takeo all alone once again. Takeo began to traveling the woods, until she came across Shikamaru, Kiba, Naruto, Choji, and Neji (aka episode like 111 or 112 or something).

Goal: To become the first and greatest blind Shinobi to ever live.

Powers: 

Kurisutaru Sheru • Kekkei Genkai~ Able to create an invisible armor that's made of Crystal and dragon chakra. One of her strongest abilities but she hasn't unlocked it yet

Me Ni Mienai Haya Sa • Kekkei Genkai~ Yoshizaki's were known for speed, but when Takeo's ancestor had allowed the dragon to share his soul and body, their bloodline's speed abilities had majorly increased. When in use, she moves so fast, you can't even see her move until she stops. One of her strong points and also most used.

Earth Release • Earth Shore Return~ All Takeo would need to do do is strike her hands on the ground to create a large wall in front of her. Used only as a defensive.


Earth Release • Hiding like a Mole~ using her chakra, she can change the earth into fine sand, allowing her to dig through the ground like a mole. Sensing what's going up above the ground and can surprise the enemy. Used pretty often.

Earth Realease• Underground Projection Fish~ Closely resembling Hiding like a Mole, only much quieter but Takeo can still sense what's going up above. Used also pretty often.

Fire Release • Fire Dragon Flame Bullet~ Considering the dragon soul gene in Takeo's bloodline, She can knead her chakra into flames, manipulating into a dragon like flame. Only the fire is an icy blue color. Not used often.

Fire Release • Great Dragon Fire~ Since Takeo has the Dragon soul, she only needs a certain amount of chakra built up inside her body ans changes it into a icy blue dragon head-shaped fireball. Only used when necessary. 

Earth Release Barrier • Earth Prison Dome of Magnificent Nothingness~ She can trap her victims inside, though she is unable to have it self repair. But that's okay with her, she usually uses it to distract her enemy. Used not often.

Great Sickle Weasel • Wind technique~ This let's the user, or Takeo, use many air currents that collide to create vacuum pockets that slashes the opponents. Not used much.

10 Hit Combo~ Punching the foe before striking the enemy into the air with an uppercut, jump above with amazing speed and punch the foe, then strike a blow down to the stomach
Rarely used since she's blind, so you can imagine her missing in the air, even with her incredible senses XDD

Chakra Blade • Straight Line~ You'd run to the opponent at high speed and deliver several punches powered by Chakra, only imagine a Yoshizaki's doing this, scary as fuck (Yes from the game but with my own twist). Used very often.

100% Single Punch~ (also from game with my twist, but lets pretend this is a Takeo thing) Takeo gathers a somewhat large amount of Chakra in her hands and releases is at she punches the opponent while running around the opponent with her incredible speed. used fairly often.

*there's other shit she does, but she either doesn't really use them and/or I'm just to lazy to type it out so, I'm not gonna name them. And Yes I know it's a lot, but she was trained day and night, so ya*

Skills out of 10~

Ninjutsu: 4.5

Nintaijutsu: 9

Genjutsu: 5.4

Taijutsu: 8.5

Senjutsu: 10

Sealing Techniques: 0

Medical Jutsu: 0

Chakra Control: 10

Chakra Flow: 9

Weapon Versatility: 0 -She's blind, so I don't think she'd be able to even get close to hitting her target XDD

Physical Strength: 5.5

Resiliency: 7.5

Intelligence: She's pretty smart like Shikamaru, guess it's a Nara/Yoshizaki thing.

Ability to work with others: ....idk XDD I mean I guess she could, but she's never had the chance until like now, but I guess XDD

What the other's think of her~

Team 7~

Naruto Uzumaki: "I THOUGHT SHE WAS A BOY!?  I MEAN WHAT KIND OF GIRL'S NAME IS TAKEO?!? But she's CRAZY GOOD AT BEING A NINJA, THAT'S WHY SHE'S MY RIVAL!?! But she's also pretty awesome and cool, since she doesn't find Sasuke attractive what so ever  which shocked most of the girls, It's was so awesome!! I still don't get how she can even do any of this stuff, SHE'S BLIND FOR CRYING OUT LOUD!?!"


Sasuke Uchiha: "She's pretty good, even if she is blind, I'll give her that. But she has her moments where she seems like our sensei  . But I find her interesting, and I really like how she doesn't like 'Like' me, unlike almost every girl I've met so far. So she's cool I guess."
Sakura Haruno:  " She's amazing, It's nice to have another girl around   GAAAHH!?! I HATE HER SO MUCH!?!? HOW COULD SHE NOT LIKE SASUKE?!? WHAT'S WORSE HE SEEMS TO LIKE HER BETTER THAN ME!?! AND SHE'S BETTER THAN ME AT CHAKRA CONTROL!?! I WILL DESTROY HER!?!?!!?       "


Kakashi Hatake:  "She seems to be very skilled and most Justu, especially since she's blind. I was a bit taken back that she was a Yoshizaki, and a girl at first, but I have to admit, I'm kinda starting to like her more and more. I just hope I don't turn into Guy cause of this kid, but then again, most likely not."

Team 8~

Kiba Inuzuka: "I couldn't believe Takeo was a girl at first, I mean how many girl's have a boy's name. But seeing she was blind, I thought she was crazy or something to be fighting or that she was kiding, boy was I proved wrong. I mean Holy Crapy! Who knew a blind girl could fight like that!! Got to admit she's pretty cool, and awesome and amazingly crazily skilled! And Akamaru Loves her! I don't blame him, she's so awesome!"

Me: "You seem to talk a lot about her...Do you like her?? "

Kiba: "WHAT?!? NO, OF COURSE NOT!?! NO WAY!! "

Me: "Pfft Lies! XDD"


Shino Aburame: "Hmm. Interesting. I'm quit curious about Hin-Riu residing in her body."

Hinata Hyuga: "S-She's an amazing ninja. I admire how she uses her weakness as her strength. We're actually pretty close.  I'm a little surprised she doesn't like Sasuke, but I'm more surprised that she doesn't really like the other girls so much."

Team 10~
Choji Akimichi: "A great motivator!!....even if she does call me fatty to do so  "

Shikamaru Nara: " I thought she was a boy at first, a very familiar boy. But after learning 'he' was actually was a 'she' and that she was blind was pretty shocking. She became more familiar until I learned her name. Takeo Yoshizaki. Then I knew who she was, my distant cousin. But she didn't seem to remember me. So I'm trying to help her remember me, and what happened."

Ino Yamanaka: "HOW COULD SHE NOT LIKE SASUKE?!? SHE EVEN HAS THE GUTS TO CALL ME A NEEDY BOY OBSESSIVE PEST?!?! I HATE HER SO MUCH, AS MUCH AS SAKURA!?!"

Team Guy~

Neji Hyuga: " I'm surprised a blind kid like her can even have such incredible skill and power. She is quit powerful, I can imagine even without the Hin-Riu spirit in her she'd be pretty powerful. I'm impressed."

Rock Lee: "I was very shocked to know that this Takeo Yoshizaki was a blind girl from the Yoshizaki Clan. But after seeing her in action, I would like to battle her one day and test her own speed! If I am unable to defeat Neji, I hope she has the power to without her ninjutsu or genjutsu...unless she needs thoughs to actually see, than that is exceptionable as well!  "

Tenten: "Now that's a girl who won't take crap from anyone. I admire her a lot for goal to prove to everyone that a girl like her can be just as good.  "


Sand Siblings~

Gaara: "Interesting. I had ran into her once when we were small children. She didn't seem afraid of me."

Kankuro: "Gotta say, pretty tough girl, even if she's blind, she's pretty powerful. But she is a Yoshizaki after all. I don't even know if Gaara could bet her, but I doubt it. He's got that sand of his and she's just a handicap. But still gotta admire her for getting this far."

Temari: " She good, but not as good as Gaara, she is blind after all. I bet I could bet her."